E-mail s profakom:

profak:
'.... I still do not see any man-on-the-moon in the first few paragraphs...'

odpoved po prerobeni odstavcov:
'I am not sure if I am in a position to provide a ‘man-on-the-moon’ (being too young and inexperienced for giant leaps?), but hope a ‘Laika-dog-in-space’ (an ice-braking step?) can be ‘hidden’ in the text. And, of course, I am trying to avoid ’Felix-Baumgartners-Free-Fall’ (nice show for people, but a questionable scientific value).'

..true story :D